Friday, June 3, 2011

Peer Edit

1. Most nonprofits that work to help refugees are ethnic community-based organizations that received government grants.

2. Tennant spent 10 years working on patrol, 12 years as patrol sergeant, and the last seven as patrol commander.

3. Leslie Huff, the project’s technology director, acknowledged how much Egbert worked to make this project successful.

4. Fountain's brother and videographer, Joey, filmed the 850-mile adventure to snowboarding destinations in the Pacific Northwest.

5. “He has a lot of passion for the game of cricket--it's evident," so-and-so said. "We learn something new from him every day out there.”

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